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The Amazing Spiderman by jayderange

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The layout for this really jumped out at me. I love these kind of images that convay the story and tone, so I write this on the basis that its a great and strong drawing and I love the grey tones. My only slight suggestion would be maybe show so detailing around spidys neck to give the idea of a collar bone. It falls on the half way point of the image so is a crucial area for you to get right. But great pic other wise. Would love to maybe see it with a logo put on as well to balance the top heavy black.
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jayderange Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
thanks, you're probably right about the collarbone needing to be more pronounced. Looks like I need to do some slight revision lol
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cct-art Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
I think that it will help. But the rest of the picture looks great. Again really eye catching layout
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